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I’m drowning
Drowning in work,
Drowning in sorrow
Drowning in the faces of sympathetic friends
Drowning, and I can’t come up for air.

The world looks different from down here.
From under the water,
And through the bubbles, blown from my last breath.
The world seems sad. And cold, and grey.
Happy faces, distorted into frowns and sad smiles

As I go deeper into this ocean
My tears become mixed with the water that traps me.
So no-one sees that I am drowning
Drowning in sickness
Drowning in despair
Drowning in the hushed voices of those around me
Drowning, and I can’t come up for air.
©2008-2009 ~PanthersChild
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Author's Comments

I wrote this in sickbay at school today, i was feeling like crap. :(
and then Mrs Schoeman came along. but if you really want to know about that, then read my journal.

anyways, um yeah....

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:iconcaneater:
...I'm sorry love...

It's very well written tho:D :+fav:

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:iconxxrockstarxxgirlxx:
Aaw cool poem!
darn them dust bunny's who have attacked ya! and Mrs M 0.o
lovers yew ♥

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